Because it’s the fifth day of month five, Laura Bloomsbury (our host for this week’s Meeting The Bar Challenge over at dVerse Poets) asks us to create a Cinquain in the style developed by Adelaide Crapsey, consisting of 5 stanzas, 5 lines each, with a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2. So…
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Certain Uncertainties Remain
Ron.’s dead
(or thinks he’s dead).
He’s never really sure.
(He’s never sure of anything,
is he?)
He’s sure
about this, though:
Nothing Is For Certain.
(Nothing is ever for certain,
Is it?)
Ron.’s been
around a while
(‘It feels like forever,’
he says, grinning like the moron
he is).
I mean
how can you fail
to know how old you are
or if you’re dead or still alive?
How? How?
Don’t ask;
he doesn’t know.
(There’s lots he doesn’t know,
and lots he doesn’t want to know;
like, ummm…)
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dVerse Poets Pub
Meeting The Bar
~ Crapsey Cinquain ~
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This is fabulous. Isn’t it? 😁
A while back I thought I’d seen your best…you won’t beat this…brilliant…
Indeed. This is just brilliant Ron.
Much💛love
Is there any question?
Love your mind Ron, and your self-effacing wit. Another lil’ gem my friend!
You’ve done it again Ron! 😀
Certain – Uncertainties – a witty cinquain.
Don’t ask–the ultimate rhetorical question. (K)
an existential conundrum, Ron – tinged with humour and uncertainty! As always though an enjoyable read
Two things I know. I am old. Ron is clever.
Love it! Made me laugh.
Funny and clever, Ron.
This is excellent… the hesitancy and the question asked if you really exist (you do)