(This weekend marks the 29th anniversary of my arrival in Vermont, in My Beloved Sandra’s arms forever. Best move I ever made…)
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Arrival
A week into October
he says his goodbyes,
drives even further north.
The New English maples
sliding by his windshield
are already losing their leaves.
Finally, everything around him
is bursting and new; everything
that had been promised is
being delivered.
Broken promises
had driven him here, driven him
as surely as the steady hum
of the moving van’s cylinders.
Everything he had become,
everything he owned — not much,
but still, everything — was rattled
and shaken inside.
He knew,
pulling at last into the driveway,
seeing her waiting on the porch,
that what he’d left behind was nothing.
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Poets And Storytellers United
Weekly Scribble #39
~ October Thrills ~
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I know this.
Not quite 30 years for me,b but 8.
I know this.
Happy 39th⚘⚘⚘
Nice poem of new welcoming
Much💓love
Perfect ending. When we land into the situation that makes us better, no sacrifice means a thing.
I love the poem’s structure, too.
Even though I’d say the last line is a “happy ending,” it still brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful.
Some goodbyes are worth it, to make room for the best hellos.
What a beautiful poem of love and thankfulness; because perhaps, all his dreams had come true.
yep, you got me with this one. Now im all sniffly. (thank you, sir. this was lovely)
Oh, not only is this a great story, but also beautifully told and crafted. (It strikes me as having a bit of a Raymond Carver feel – and he was oner of the best.)
(Sheesh! *one of)
This poem has stolen my heart, Ron. Like a film in my head, I saw the ‘New English maples / sliding by his windshield’, heard the ‘steady hum / of the moving van’s cylinders’ and the uncertainty in the rattling and shaking. But oh, how I smiled, with tears in my eyes, at the final stanza!
Ron, you brought it all to life .. in living color … and beautiful.
Lucky man…Great write !
My heart! I love the ending…which is really a new beginning. Very touching, Ron. Thank you.
And so the ending is only a beginning… 29 years! Wonderful.
What a beautiful love poem. I think your Sandra is a lucky lady … and I’ m sure she knows it!