I won’t be sharing the stream-of-consciousness journal entry that led to this poem, but I will send my thanks to Grace at the dVerse Poets Pub for asking us to sharpen and employ our S-O-C skills for today’s Meeting The Bar Challenge.
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Downstream
I tried that backward writing thing
the lady told me about; I started out
at the bottom of the page, tried
to write from right to left, tried
to spell the words backwards.
I tried and tried and failed.
The effort almost killed me.
I turned the page. I tried again.
I started at the bottom, wrote
the first line from left to right,
left to right half-way up the page,
all the way up the page, managing
to finish my diatribe with less than
one line left at the top of the page.
Perfection. A smooth first draft, an
unimpeded stream of consciousness
unencumbered by mechanics
even if it’s upside-down, even if
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dVerse Poets Pub
Meeting The Bar
~ Stream Of Consciousness ~
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Love this!
Gorgeously rendered, Ron!
It feels very true and honest thought. You tried and you got it.
Clever.
Whatever it takes; nice job. I love S-O-C. My pen twitches with anticipation, then like a dog let off the leash it tears across the page, taking longer and longer strides, until it stops exhausted on the third page of longhand.
Love the outcome, so honest of you to share the process. Hope you had fun with this prompt.
This one made me smile! Sometimes things just get twisted around… and its all a matter of figuring them out!
I enjoyed the walk through your process. No way would I be able to write backwards: I can’t do anything in reverse beginning with reversing a car! The end result was great, thanks for sharing.
Ha, ha! I enjoyed this. Sometimes you just have to shrug and move on – and get a poem out of it on the way.
We can’t always control the flow, even when we try to uncontrol it. (K)
I might like to try writing right to left and bottom to top, but spelling the words backward I don’t think I’d want to try, even if
LOL. Think you should join my party.
Not easy this exercise… love what you did though