A Shadorma Sequence (3-5-3-3-7-5 syllables each) to meet today’s dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille Challenge (44 word poetry) incorporating the word “eye”.
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Unrequited
She has them:
the brownest eyes he’s
ever seen.
Beautiful.
He thinks he might be in love.
(Then she winks at him).
He winks back
or he thinks he’s winked,
but hasn’t.
He just can’t.
(He’s stuck in wide-eyed wonder
drooling on his shoes.)
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dVerse Poets Pub
Quadrille Monday #147
~ Eyeing the Quadrille ~
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Often the ladies who are the most wink (and nudge) worthy render a guy incapable of a wink
A bit of coyness is what she probably thought.
That can be an awkward situation. But I do like that winking part – very playful -if it happens.
Hahahah. Poor guy! Thank you for the laugh, Ron.
Ah….the faulty short term memory of one smitten by Cupid’s arrow! This made me smile.
I love your ending here, “(He’s stuck in wide-eyed wonder
drooling on his shoes.)” Love can make us do the goofiest things and that is part of the magic.
Aww! Totally love-struck!
wonderful
Winking is a very strange signal. Drooling is positively a turn off. These two need to talk 🙂
this is so adorable.
He’s gone, lost, lol.
You never fail to bring unbridled laughter into my day … cheers.
That is why the mating games never work… and drool shoes are not attractive.
*laughing hard*
Well, that ending gave me the giggles! I needed the giggles😄, Thank you.
Pat