Hook-Up Masters Share A Secret
she didn’t really he said
but I swear to god
no one would know it
just by looking at her amen
to that brother he replied
and added but of course
who’d want to just look
I mean you must have, you
know, just once anyway; she
must have but he interrupted
no really man she didn’t
she wasn’t like that I
know it’s hard to believe but
hard to believe he sneered
I know you dog and I just
can’t believe you never
but he cut him short
believe it he said really
she didn’t we didn’t
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Friday #9
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(cringe) … Gossip. Nasty business.
People tend to believe what they want to believe, no matter what we say. Love this little dialogue that leaves so much to the reader’s imagination. Innuendo, go!
What verisimilitude! And how cleverly ambiguous!
This is like eavesdropping in a locker room. It’s interesting here that instead of the usual, “yeah, we sure did” it’s a “never happened”.
Ha ha! Very stimulating. I just want to (over) hear a little more.
Some biggies have called this “just boyhood locker-room talk.” I won’t name names but he paid dearly as hush money.
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I love the way you presented this, Ron. And I must say GOOD FOR HER …. !
I don’t believe him .. not for a minute!!!
very clever ron, love the lingo, love the format, and really like that title, well written my friend
LOL enjoyed this bit of secret
Have a nice weekend
Much love…
Love the dialogue, Ron!
I liked how this had the feel of a gossipy conversation
These conversations were usually reversed?