Sevenling (he flew by)


Sevenling (he flew by) *

He flew by her, doing about 90
in a No Passing Zone. She honked
and cursed and flipped him off.

She couldn’t see his writhing wife
hyperventilating in the back seat
giving birth to the second triplet.

Every story: two sides, simultaneously.

*Not familiar with the Sevenling form? You can read all about it HERE.
Fair Warning: Addictive
Poets And Storytellers United
Writers’ Pantry #80
~ The Struggle ~

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13 thoughts on “Sevenling (he flew by)

  1. Luckily that never happened with my wife although our second child arrived early but arrangements were made in time for a midwife to attend the delivery. Lucky me, she then made me her assistant!

  2. Whoa! That’s quite a story…so far. Maybe it demands a sequel. You know: What happened to the child born in the backseat?

  3. Brilliant! A nice reminder that there are always two sides to every story. Whenever someone is unpleasant to me (I’m thankful to say that it doesn’t happen often) I send up a silent prayer for them because who knows what’s happened to make them so? Well, I send up the prayer after asking silent forgiveness for swearing at them in my head…

  4. Pingback: Sevenling (the journey | rivrvlogr

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