audible sunset tanka

afternoon windchimes 
—sunset’s sensory concert—
each breeze visible
musical synesthesia
a colorful symphony

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dVerse Poets
MTB: Critique And Craft
~ Synesthesia, Part II ~
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20 thoughts on “audible sunset tanka

  1. I love windchimes, Ron; there’s one hanging in the cherry tree outside my window, I can see it swaying – sadly no audible chiming through the double glazing. I especially enjoyed the phrase ‘sunset’s sensory concert’ and the thought of a breeze visible in colour and sound.

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