“Good morning,” he told her
kissing her in the kitchen and
holding up a hand-scrawled page.
“Here’s my poem,” he said
flashing her the single sheet,
but his monotone confused her.
She couldn’t tell if he meant
“Here’s my poem,” as if he’d
lost it and found it again, or
if he meant, “Here’s my poem,”
as if he’d had a breakthrough and
and finally written something original
or if he meant “Here’s my poem,”
as if everything else he’d ever written
was only a versified literary warm-up.
“That’s wonderful,” she told him
smiling her genuine sunshine smile
in her polka-dot morning housecoat;
“You’re my hero,” she added
pouring him an oversized cup
and trying to be unequivocal.
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Poets And Storytellers United
Writers’ Pantry #32
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Stress and intonation most definitely makes a difference 🙂
He is expecting a lot. We are all different she my love him for many reasons other than his poetry and vice versa!
Ha ha, of course I immediately went into trying out her remark in the three possible variations, LOL.
I’m laughing, of course, but that monotone didn’t help anything. It really didn’t. 🙂
Like there was poem homework due. Glad the dog didn’t eat this.
she knows he is a loony…all she can do is humour him
haha…yeah, meaning matters. cheers!
LOL nice on Ron
Happy Sunday
Much💝love
Her acceptance means the world to him….
Absolutely brilliant poem! So much captured in this, the couple, the home, the writer’s struggles, the woman’s patience, the love. Brilliant!
Intonation, like commas, is not to be ignored! I like this one!
It’s all about where you place the emphasis. Love it!!
A tricky situation…. the conundrum of finding the emphasis 😂 Perfect!