Persistence Of Vision

Originally published (online) in August 2013 by The Rapid Eye (now defunct) and dusted off for this week’s Writers’ Pantry at Poets And Storytellers United.

The world’s a mess right now, and apparently it was equally messy back then, too.


Persistence Of Vision

She opens the fish,
finds her daughter’s fingers inside;
every fish the same explosion.

Poets And Storytellers United
Writers’ Pantry #31

12 thoughts on “Persistence Of Vision

  1. A most unwelcome surprise, the contents of the fish. Startling, but well done. And, yes, it’s apt for our times, and all times.

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