Absence (for OSI)

Photo Credit: la tigresa

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Posted for today’s (“Absent“) prompt at ONE SINGLE IMPRESSION

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12 thoughts on “Absence (for OSI)”

Posted September 30, 2012 at 7:06 am by vivinfrance

Superbly sad senryu.

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 7:13 am by linesofcommunication

Full of sensual promise

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 7:28 am by J Cosmo Newbery

A great use of pathos, simply but deeply put.

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 7:57 am by Green Speck

This was so realistic !!!

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 10:32 am by Tilly Bud - The Laughing Housewife

Oh Ron, this is lovely.

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 12:36 pm by sandra

lovely!

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 1:02 pm by pmwanken

Sumptuously sweet, Ron.

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 1:35 pm by Kristine_ES

beautiful. the words and photo work perfectly together.

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Posted September 30, 2012 at 8:45 pm by Write Girl

What wonderful words. The second line mixes in a feeling of longing and sadness. Nicely written.

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Posted October 2, 2012 at 5:09 pm by laura hegfield

such tender sorrow… beautiful.

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Posted October 2, 2012 at 10:39 pm by colleen

I feel the same about this. I wish I’d written it!

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Posted October 7, 2012 at 11:37 pm by Shauna

Yum. Compy

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