It’s Quadrille Monday again at the dVerse Poets Pub; time to create a 44-word poem.
This week, our host De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) challenges us to create a quad using the word “Star” or some variant thereof.
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Tour Guide
Just before our first kiss
she pointed up at the sun
and said, “Call it what you like,
but where I come from
lovers hold hands
and gaze up at it
—the brightest star
in the midnight sky—
and fall more deeply in love.”
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dVerse Poets Pub
Quadrille Monday #169
~ A Star Is Born ~
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YES. Sun as star, and love beacon. Beautiful.
I love this, Ron, beautiful and romantic!
Ahhh- the romance ❤ . A lovely whimsical picture and just in time for Valentine's Day.
This is so wonderfully romantic.
This is someone who has the universe perfectly mapped out.
“Where I come from” sets the stage in delicious ways. Good one, Ron.
Lovely Ron! Very romantic.
Bravo. Nice one Ron. Took me back to my days of falling in love. Wonderful flashback
Much❤love
Lovely poem.
Love wins again!
The light of romance brightens up the sky in this one.
I’m jealous! That’s a lovely, romantic moment! ❤
~David
Beautiful and romantic, Ron.!
One of your best! So romantic.
Lovely and romantic Ron ☺️❤️
A lovely and romantic poem. Nicely done, Ron.
Well Ron, I come from the boondocks and heartily agree with her!
That’s one of the most romantic love notes I’ve ever read. 💘
Quadrillicious (and sweet) 💜
This made me go awww!