Great Big Empty

Great Big Empty

great big empty
wind hollow wind
blue wind blown
over starry white
midnight sands
like saxophone blues
as hollow as night 
as empty as blue
starry space

grey wet wind
through steel skies
moves green trees
on mountainsides
blows soft thistle-hair
with coming thunder sound
along the valley floor
pushes fine flowerstem
sideways, bending boughs
with promised
                        rain

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Poets And Storytellers United
Weekly Scribble #83
~ au naturale ~
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poets and storytell

7 thoughts on “Great Big Empty

  1. “great big empty
    wind hollow wind
    blue wind blown
    over starry white
    midnight sands
    like saxophone blues
    as hollow as night
    as empty as blue
    starry space”

    i really liked the repetition of the word “blue”, it really set a mood for me… well done.

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