One (un)True Sentence

Lisa’s hosting this week’s Poetics Challenge at dVerse Poets Pub, and has presented us with a selection of great Hemingway sentences to use as a trigger for our own work. I selected: “Isn’t it pretty to think so” from The Sun Also Rises (1926).

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On Tour

Things’ll be better when I get back,
he keeps telling himself
checking the safety on his rifle and
inching toward the trench’s edge.

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dVerse Poets
Tuesday Poetics
~ One True Sentence ~
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13 thoughts on “One (un)True Sentence

  1. ouch, sounds like a personal experience Ron … on return the soldiers are changed but home and folks are the same! Wondering what haunts you …

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