A Shadow Shadorma

Posted June 22, 2021

Non-Erasure

Nothing works;
whiskey, poetry,
hypnosis…
None of it.
She just won’t leave him alone.
No shadows vanish.

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(Shadorma Syllabification = 3/5/3/3/7/5)
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Tuesday Twiglet #232
~ Shadows Vanish ~
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8 thoughts on “A Shadow Shadorma”

Posted June 22, 2021 at 7:44 am by Misky

Chilling.

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Posted June 22, 2021 at 7:53 am by Lucy

That’s haunting and as well saddening.

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Posted June 22, 2021 at 8:07 am by ladysighs

I like that form. Says so much with so few words.

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Posted June 22, 2021 at 10:27 am by LuAnne Holder

Now you have introduced me to a new poetic form. Thanks so much. I’ll have to try this one and share it with my writers’ group.

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Posted June 22, 2021 at 1:41 pm by M

What do the kids say? 100. Yep.

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Posted June 22, 2021 at 6:07 pm by poetrybydebi

Some memories hang around far too long.

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Posted June 22, 2021 at 8:39 pm by purplepeninportland

Clever, Ron!

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Posted June 24, 2021 at 10:13 am by Ken / rivrvlogr

We all have our demons.

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