Whatever it is I say to her
she repeats back perfectly:
I think you’re beautiful, I say;
she tells me I should trim my beard.
I tell her how much I love her.
She reminds me to take my pills.
She gives me a kiss
when I bring her coffee.
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This is a (real) oldie, dredged up for this week’s Writers’ Pantry #10 at Poets and Storytellers United. It was originally published (online) in November 2011, at the now-defunct Every Day Poets. Sorry, no active link remains.
I love it!!!!
I love this poem…
This made me smile, Ron – there is a tender truth here…
My husband could have written this one, Ron – I love it too!
I think things are working quite well in your relationship.
Yes, and I love it as well!
This is absolutely lovely, Ron! 💝
Some messages deserve repeating. This is beautiful.
Perfect❤ Happy Sunday Ron
Much❤love
A warm poem to find on this Sunday. 🙂
Ah, life between beloveds—how complicated it is!
Maybe a woman needs coffee before you give her compliments.
A match made in heaven.
This is my new favorite of yours, Ron. I love the truth it sings about healthy relationships. For I truly believe that to love another well, we must love them like they want (and need) to be loved, not how we want.
I echo Magaly. Lovely write Ron.
Anna :o]
This left me with a smile. A lovely peek at a love at work!
I believe I’ve been in these conversations before. It’s just all too familiar. Ha!
I like this snapshot of a relationship…you nailed the tone, perfectly
Now that’s a marriage of everyday and love!