The Verdict’s Inevitable, But…

Sevenling (he watches them)

He watches them all
—good guys, bad guys, bystanders—
He identifies.

He plays all the parts
—prosecution, defense, judge—
His record’s spotless

But first, a commercial break…

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Not familiar with the Sevenling form? You can learn the basics HERE
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15 thoughts on “The Verdict’s Inevitable, But…

  1. I’ve not heard of this form. It would require thought and, for me, several hundred rewrites! I do like the ending.

  2. I like this form and love what you’ve done with it. I don’t remember if I ever tried this one, but I think I’ll give it a go.

  3. Pingback: When lamenting death, life, and suffering… | Hephaestus’ Waste & Cosmic Rubble

  4. I like the form too (as every other commentor). Couldn’t help but think of the president’s televised trial. Predictable ending but first ratings and a commercial break of course.

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